another poem
currently untitled
There's a pain left from sickness
of one shattered heart
Haunting what's left for thinkers
ripping them apart
Overzealous for their prize
seeking jealous love
They analyze the minds
of ones who've said enough
i'm sorry that i don't have a title for it yet. i don't even know if it's any good. so feedback would be good, people. please leave some comments.
1 Comments:
Cotillion on fire
Banishment of mind
Left path
Hmmm, don't know where those really came from, they just came out;)
Trish
March 18, 2005 at 12:13 PM
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