this journal shall be a journey with several dimensions in respect to my acting career and life in general. along the way, i plan on sharing my passions with the world.

Wednesday, January 19, 2005

another poem

currently untitled

There's a pain left from sickness
of one shattered heart
Haunting what's left for thinkers
ripping them apart
Overzealous for their prize
seeking jealous love
They analyze the minds
of ones who've said enough

i'm sorry that i don't have a title for it yet. i don't even know if it's any good. so feedback would be good, people. please leave some comments.

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Cotillion on fire

Banishment of mind

Left path

Hmmm, don't know where those really came from, they just came out;)

Trish

March 18, 2005 at 12:13 PM

 

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